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Post  Jboi on Thu Mar 08, 2012 10:01 pm

Out of Character
MineCraft account name: Jboi
Country of Residence and Time Zone: EST
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
Roleplaying is acting as someone you aren't but in realistic ways that mirror the real world. I have RP'd on multitudes of other servers on various games, I currently am a mod on another server that is under construction. I am also fairly familiar with the lore and community (I was on the original server back when the survivors found the bomb and was detonated killing everyone in a 200mi radius xP, I was a russian character at the time Yuski who was a bit crazy)
What is your reason for applying to this server?
I explained this in the above paragraph.
Have you been banned before, if so why?
No never banned
Do you agree with our rules?
Yes
Will you use the server's official texture pack?
Yes of course I love the Post-Apoc Texture pack

In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)
Nikolai Petrovic
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far:
He is a survivalist/scientist who immerses himself in wires and cables to create strange machines that never do very much. He prefers to stay in a bunker/laboratory but will leave his base for food or to gather samples from the outside world as he grows all his own food in a room in his bunker. One day, when he was leaving his bunker and after not taking more than a few steps from the hatch door, he saw a group of bandits in the distance, and decided to hide in a brush nearby. His only mistake being forgetting to shut the hatch door. They group came by and investigated the bunker, splitting in half while one half went inside and the other circled the area making sure a larger group didn't come by. He laid in the brush until nightfall but the bandits stayed inside his bunker and ruined it. He began to crawl away under the cover of night but was captured by a sentry circling the bunker, and before he knew what happened Nikolai had been struck in the head and carried off. When he woke up he was inside his laboratory as it was burning down from the kerosene poured into it. He scrambled to get out and escaped with only the clothes on his back. He trudged away in a drunken like stupor, and didn't turn back.
Does or did your character have any companions or family?
No
How old is your character?
30
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
His eyes are pale blue and give off the impression of being blind when in reality he has 20/20 vision. He also has a beard.
How does your character act?
He is fairly timid but can crack his fair share of jokes when he wants too
Character's occupation:
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
He can read and write.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:
None, he is mainly only an archer and scientist
Does your character hate or fear anything?
He hates the Securo-drones because the face creeps him out, but besides that he is relatively normal.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): ((Hopefully emotional pain counts))
*Nikolai slowly wakes from the blow to the head*
*He looks around and realizes that his laboratory is burning down*
*His arm is on fire and he pats it down very quickly*
*He gets up tears filling his eyes and smoke filling his lungs*
*He lets out a faint cry and crawls to his knees.*
*He lets himself go for a moment and cries into his arms on the floor*
*He then realizes what he must do, and he gets up, and leaves his laboratory, softly crying to himself along the way, doing his best to hold back the emotion*
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Re: Jboi's App

Post  Jboi on Thu Mar 08, 2012 10:03 pm

guess I can't edit the post
Here is the ss

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Re: Jboi's App

Post  Jboi on Thu Mar 08, 2012 10:36 pm

Damnit I hate not being able to edit my topic
Fuck yo shit, I got a mustache
I knew I was forgetting something

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Re: Jboi's App

Post  Black_Doom on Fri Mar 09, 2012 2:18 pm

Jboi wrote:Out of Character
MineCraft account name: Jboi

Character name: (Last names aren't required)
Nikolai Petrovic

- *Snicker* *Snack* this is how I cut my apps -


Ok lets give your app the once over.

*25 minutes later

Good, nice responses in your prereqs, presenting yourself with experience and a past from what you like.

Gave your story the read and I was seeing that your distinctive character has no relative start. We would like to see from some time in the youth where he has picked up or was inspired to do his type of trade. Also including any constructive past struggles he might have had to contend to.

You RP example is stepping in the right direction though I must ask you try and make it longer with some vocals and some onomatopoeias to be more descriptive of what is going on around the charter.

It is a nice thing to find what you forgot without being reminded.

If you want to edit things of yours on here why not make an account with us? It's quite simple and quick to set it up.

DENIED

Please make improvements where I have noted and make another post in this topic, and we will give it another look for acceptance.
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Post  Jboi on Fri Mar 09, 2012 11:35 pm

Take #2

Out of Character
MineCraft account name: Jboi
Country of Residence and Time Zone: EST
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
Roleplaying is acting as someone you aren't but in realistic ways that mirror the real world. I have RP'd on multitudes of other servers on various games, I currently am a mod on another server that is under construction. I am also fairly familiar with the lore and community (I was on the original server back when the survivors found the bomb and was detonated killing everyone in a 200mi radius xP, I was a russian character at the time Yuski who was a bit crazy)
What is your reason for applying to this server?
I explained this in the above paragraph.
Have you been banned before, if so why?
No never banned
Do you agree with our rules?
Yes
Will you use the server's official texture pack?
Yes of course I love the Post-Apoc Texture pack

In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)
Nikolai Petrovic
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far:
[New]
When he was born, his mother's life was lost. He was the youngest of 3 children, and his father, after losing his wife, became more of a drunkard that he already was. His older brother and sister raised him for the most part, his brother would go out hunting and gather the needed supplies to carry on, while his sister played more of the housewife role, with the distinct difference being her education. He was 10 years younger then both of them as they were twins, and they all lived in a small wooden cabin in the middle of a barren field surrounded by mountains. His sister, Maria, named after her mother, taught him to read and write, something his older brother Joseph never learned to do. At the same time, Joseph was teaching him how to operate weapons, and basic survival skills. He lived by the rules that there may not be a tomorrow, and any of them could die at any time, therefore, everyone had to be ready to survive on their own and carry on the Petrovic name. His sister felt differently, because of their isolation she believed in trusting people, making Nikolai the neutral mediator for most of their arguments. When his father died when he was 10, he barely thought anything of it, as his father was absent for most of his growing up and practically drunk himself to death. In the end, he grew to be a well rounded individual, someone who could change the world if put in the right position. One day, he decided to go on a small adventure, he found a road that his brother always warned him not to follow because if someone followed him back to their home in the middle of the mountains, they would be in great danger. He decided against his warnings, and followed the road for quite some time, and found a small city that he had only read about in magazines and books his sister had. He explored abandoned buildings and found gadgets long since broken and destroyed, he collected them and brought a few engineering books with him back to the cabin. Upon returning however, there was no cabin. The entire cabin was in flames, and when he reached it, he found neither his sister nor brothers remains inside. He hopes to this day that they somehow made it out alive, but realizes they may have easily been taken hostage by a group of bandits. To some extent, he even blames himself fearing someone saw him leaving from the area, and decided to check it out for any encampments. He took his books and electronics, and left.
[/New]
He is a survivalist/scientist who immerses himself in wires and cables to create strange machines that never do very much. He prefers to stay in a bunker/laboratory but will leave his base for food or to gather samples from the outside world as he grows all his own food in a room in his bunker. One day, when he was leaving his bunker and after not taking more than a few steps from the hatch door, he saw a group of bandits in the distance, and decided to hide in a brush nearby. His only mistake being forgetting to shut the hatch door. They group came by and investigated the bunker, splitting in half while one half went inside and the other circled the area making sure a larger group didn't come by. He laid in the brush until nightfall but the bandits stayed inside his bunker and ruined it. He began to crawl away under the cover of night but was captured by a sentry circling the bunker, and before he knew what happened Nikolai had been struck in the head and carried off. When he woke up he was inside his laboratory as it was burning down from the kerosene poured into it. He scrambled to get out and escaped with only the clothes on his back. He trudged away in a drunken like stupor, and didn't turn back.
Does or did your character have any companions or family?
No
How old is your character?
30
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
His eyes are pale blue and give off the impression of being blind when in reality he has 20/20 vision. He also has a beard.
How does your character act?
He is fairly timid but can crack his fair share of jokes when he wants too
Character's occupation:
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
He can read and write.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:
None, he is mainly only an archer and scientist
Does your character hate or fear anything?
He hates the Securo-drones because the face creeps him out, but besides that he is relatively normal.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): ((Hopefully emotional pain counts))
[New stuff here]
*Nikolai slowly wakes from the blow to the head*
*He looks around and realizes that his laboratory is burning down*
*His arm is on fire and he pats it down very quickly*
"What the hell!" he exclaims as she tries to get to his feet.
*He gets up tears filling his eyes and smoke filling his lungs*
*He lets out a faint cry and drops to his knees crawling along the floor*
*He lets himself go for a moment and cries into his arms on the floor*
"This can't be happening... it- it-. Not again!" He stutters.
*He then realizes what he must do, and he gets up, and leaves his laboratory, softly crying to himself along the way, doing his best to hold back the emotion*
"Carry on... for the Petrovic name."
[/New stuff here]
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Fix'd if you need anything else just tell me excited to try out the server bounce

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Re: Jboi's App

Post  Black_Doom on Sat Mar 10, 2012 12:50 pm

Jboi wrote:Take #2

MineCraft account name: Jboi
Nikolai Petrovic

- *Snicker* *Snack* this is how I cut my apps -


ACCEPTED

Thank you for making some changes that I marked out for you, you made ample enough change for my purposes.

Welcome to Ruined World and hope you enjoy your stay with us.
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