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Post  Admin on Tue Nov 29, 2011 11:35 pm

Hi guys, if you want to show how your old character died, post it here. Here is mine:
(THIS WILL ONLY MAKE SENSE TO THE PEOPLE IN THE OLD RUINED WORLD, AND WHO KNEW MY CHARACTER TOWARDS THE END)


(part of my old application)
Aj was a very lucky man. Before the war, in 2024, Aj's ancestors were wary of destruction. They could see it coming.
As that, they were one of the only people who kept a constantly maintained underground shelter.
They were called crazy, but when the war started, they and 3 other close families came to the shelter and closed it shut.

Over the years, as radiation seeped in, they constantly were digging and closing off top parts of the shelter,
as they had radiation meters. After 40 years, they stopped, and lived for decades in relative harmony....Until 2114,
when strange signals swept the Earth and all the circuitry in the shelter was destroyed.
This put the shelter in grave danger. For almost a century, half the citizens born in the vault died from many causes.
By the time Aj was born in the bunker, things have returned to normal and Aj had a good life.
He was taught literacy through messages his relatives left each other. He had many close relationships and was loved by
all the inhabitants. He enjoyed life.

Until damn raiders broke through sealed off sections of the shelter in 2202 and murdered every citizen of the
struggling shelter. They were already running out of genetic material for reproduction. Aj was a rare "clean" child.
He only survived by hiding in a tipped cabinet with his sister, Andrea. The cabinet was old and the raiders paid no
attention to it. When the invaders finally left, AJ and his sister emerged into the terror that was modern day Earth.
She was the only family he had left, and swore to himself he would never let anything happen to her.

They had to live off of leftover supplies that the raiders deemed worthless and unnecessary.
They were able to survive through scavenging and rationing, as did their ancestors.
During this time they learned basic survival skills. One day, he and Andrea ventured out a bit too far and weren’t
able to make their way back to the bunker before sundown, so they took cover in an abandoned house.
They took turns sleeping and keeping watch. Then on the Dreaded Hour (as AJ calls it), when his sister was keeping watch,
she disappeared. All that was left as he awoke was a note reading “AJ, save me”. He never returned to the bunker,
he swore to himself he wouldn’t until he found his sister. Whenever he is tired or deprived he tells himself
“There is no yesterday, no tomorrow. No later, no earlier. Just now. And now, I want to find Andrea.”

Then took place the events of ruined world. His friends, his enemies, his adventures. Things such as the Helljumpers
or the Knights. NOD. His espionage and exploration. Fathom, Frostheim and Canaan. The Boulder City chronicles. The Caruth
and his Vamparism. Halifax and the Frantanzella. TJ Drago's Island. The construction of Hadrian's. Advent, and it's
beautiful gardens. Quinn Hatrik, Marcus Cognomes, Quintus, Robb, Andrew S, Schatten, Dimitri, Victor Halifax,
Felice Caruth, Andrea, Darrik, Smoke Fumus, Crazy Andrew and his son, Nineveh, Karmik, Lilium, Sourris, Gaourn, TJ, the
Western Front, Tatoo, Cody, Dennis, Dituani, and Alex Lassel. All people he encountered. His days in hiding.

The Legion.

Everything he seen, assisted, or destroyed in the event of the original Ruined World.

His conclusion:
After the completion of the Hydra and the destruction of his enemies, AJ Williams had accomplished everything he wanted.
However, he still felt that there was a gap inside him that had been torn open a long time ago and never closed. He had
to find his sister. It was the only thing that had mattered to him ever. On the outside, he was a smiling middle aged man,
who enjoyed a drink and a good laugh. On the inside, he was an emotionally tormented soul, desperate for air. So he assembled
all of his men, his friends, and anybody willing to help him. They searched. For days. Even without any glimpse of success,
they pressed on. They scoured all of the land as far as they possibly could. One day however, they stumbled upon something.
A small settlement of tribals. He approched them. They spoke a language foreign to everybody in the party, except to AJ.
During his time in hiding, he had learned to speak an old language, known back then as Italian. He communicated with them.
He asked to meet their leader. They did as he asked. Their leader emerged. It was a woman of some familiarity, but any facial
features were undiscernable, due to many war wounds. He tried asking about his sister, but the woman just stared at him. Then
she finally said, "Tu ricordi una delle schiave." You remind me of one of the slaves. AJ just looked at her, then he grabbed her
by the neck and lifted her up. He drew his right hand, and flipped the switch on his glove. Out shot a burning passionate flame.
He held it under her neck. "Where... is... she!!" he shouted with rage, expecting the woman to answer. She stared at him with fear.

After a few seconds he shouted again, and she snapped back into focus. She pointed towards a cheap stable. AJ throws
her on the ground with all his strength, then goes into a full on sprint. He barges in, and sees dirty people chained to a wall. None
are his sister. In the back of the room, there is a pile of bodies. He slowly approaches it, gently removing the corpses from the pile, and laying them down next to it. A light patter of rain. He continues. Then thunder. He sees the body of a woman lying face down. He turns it over. He sees his sister's familiar face. Her eyes are closed, and she has a small grin on her face. He starts crying. After about a minute, he realises something. His eyes glow with the same rage that fuels his fire. His eyes flicker a strike of flame. He emerges from the stable carrying his sister's body. He shouts, "MY PEOPLE! RETURN TO YOUR HOMES! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP. I HAVE WHAT I NEED." Everybody left. Except for the tribals. He just stood there. Alone. Into every single one of their hearts, or whatever part of your body invokes fear. Then he turned, and walked away. An hour after he left, the tribals returned to their homes, for it was nighttime. In the dead of night, AJ Williams approached the town. He stood in the center. The settlement was asleep. He shot his gloved right hand into the sky, and a small, but glorious fire glowed in his palm. He held his hands together, doubling the light it gave off. The ring of light around him slowly increased, and although he was expieriencing the most intense burning possible, he held on. After a minuet, the light had covered all of the town. Miles away, one of his men looked back, and saw a wave of fire shoot from the ground. It lasted for a few seconds then died. The tribal town was nothing more the a smoke expelling smoldering heap. AJ emerged from the smoke, his left hand nothing but charred bone. He walked over to his sisters body, and lifted her up. He walked away.
Eventually, he reached a familiar area. His old family bunker. He opened the large door, and walked inside. He went to the place he and his sister moved their family after the attack. He layed her with them. He took all of his personal things and hid them in a nearby cave. His gauntlet, a sample of his blood, his trench coat, VICI (his gun) and a note were buried there. He lived the rest of his days in that bunker with his family. He had made his mark. Among his peers there was panic allocating to everyone due to his dissapearence. One day, a note appeared on his old desk.
YOU WONT SEE ME AGAIN. DECIDE AMONGST YOURSELVES FOR ANY DECISIONS THAT NEED CONCLUSIONS. THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR HELP.
SINCERELY, VALKYRIE WILLIAMS.

Nobody ever saw him again.
Rumor has it he had a son in boulder. But that's just a rumor.
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Re: Conclusions to Old Characters

Post  SK4RR3R on Fri Dec 02, 2011 6:46 pm

Tatoo was walking down a trodden path.The link to the rest of his species was strong,he could feel it.The Anarchists had always been mentally linked with their species,sharing memories,ideas,skills.They were extremely intelegent due to this.,and could even link to other humans minds,to read them,eliminate memories,or destroy their rational thought completely.However,this species has no interest in war,they only wish to observe.Tatoos home planet was not too far from earth...relatively speaking.On clear nights,you could see it amidst the many stars,though it was imposible to determine which one it was.It was a night like this.Tatoo stopped and looked at the sky,thinking of his other people.He had been sent here years ago,hundreds to be exact,you see anarchists have extended lifetimes,but often never fulfill their natural lifetimes,for many reasons.The stars were glittering,all was as it should be.His eyes were scanning the stars,and as his eyes glided over one,he felt a lurch in his mind.Quickly focusing all his minds on it.There was something wrong.He could feel it.Suddenly there is a ripping in his mind.An echoing voice forces its way into his skull,and in a booming voice he can hear "You are being terminated.Your time with the humans has made you forget your goals.We will send another.Goodbye".Dropping to his knees,trying to understand what is happening,he suddenly feels like his entire mind is being pulled at.Ripped away from him.A feeling rips through him.Pain.He screams,gripping his skull hard,his nails cutting to the bone,as blood pours from the holes.Suddenly everything stops.The pain.Everything.He is just a essence,floating.He sees his body lying there.Empty.His eyes have lost their pupils.His essence starts lifting away slowly.The speed increases.Soon he is flying towards the star so quickly that everythings a blur.The star gets closer.The speed decreases as I approach.The closer i get the more i see.Im home.I begin to make out people.Something is definatly wrong.Most everyone is wearing battle armour.I speed in on a large building.I am getting closer to the roof.I am going to die! But no,I pass right through it.I slow to a almost complete stop.I glide towards a pod covered in glass.Their a thousands aranged in rows.I pass through the glass.I see another anarchists.No pupils,same as the body i just left.I close in on his eyes.Pass into his skull.Entwine my very essence around his brain.
I open my eyes.
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Re: Conclusions to Old Characters

Post  Admin on Fri Dec 02, 2011 6:57 pm

Well, if you want to, it could just take place after the event in the lore.
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Post  SK4RR3R on Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:06 pm

to be honest i would enjoy playing as him again,especially with a bit of a legacy Wink :L
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Post  Admin on Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:08 pm

Sure, that way people would automatically recognize you.
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Post  SK4RR3R on Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:08 pm

Okay,thanks Smile There is a slight mispelling of the name,but ill change it to Taboo to fit the lore Smile
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Post  Schwinny on Fri Dec 09, 2011 7:46 pm

Making a short character conclusion on Alex Lassel. I'm not a great writer, but I figured my character needed some form or closure. Enjoy. Smile

Alex regained consciousness and staggered to his feet. He was severely wounded and could barely move. He looked up, from down in the deep hole he had seen Cain leap into. There was a passage way carved out behind him, he knew Cain must have gone through there. Alex painfully limped through the darkness, even though he knew there wasn't much hope left. There was a light at the end of the tunnel and he knew deep down that his final confrontation with Cain would be awaiting through there. Alex stumbled into the large chamber in which the light had been coming from, and standing there, waiting for him, was Cain Melstrome. He was restraining a young boy with a knife to his throat. "Dad!" the boy cried desperately. "Not another step!" grumbled Cain with a look of pure hatred on his face. Alex had never felt so helpless in his life. There was his son in the clutches of his mortal enemy, and there wasn't much he could do about it. It was now or never though, Alex drew his handgun and quickly fired a shot into Cain's hand which carried the knife. He released the boy to inspect his crippled hand, who quickly ran to his father's side. Cain lashed his head to look up at Alex, his face dark with rage. "And what now?! We both know that was your last shot!". Alex glanced at his son, Reavus, and whispered "Run.", barely able to speak. Reavus dashed out of the chamber as Alex slid his handgun across the floor. The two enemies drew their swords and prepared for a duel. "This is it, Alex, it's over!" shouted Cain. "So sure?" Alex replied as he calmly began to approach his nemesis. Cain lunged and attempted an overhand swing, which Alex deflected to the left with his own blade. Cain began wildly slashing away at Alex but his attacks were easily blocked by his much smaller opponent. Alex tried some offensive jabs, some of which penetrated Cain's armor. Alex was already weakened as it was though and he was loosing energy fast. Cain was beginning to gain the upper hand as Alex realized the only option he had left. Alex grabbed an explosive charge from his belt and started the timer. He pressed it against Cain's chest and held on tight, ready to leave this world. "What?! What are doing?" Cain desperately tried to free himself from Alex's grip but was unable to before the blow. "See you in hell." Alex whispered. The chamber floor collapsed, dropping both men into a boiling pit of acid. Reavus was looking up to the surface in the same hole he had been forced to leap into as he heard an explosion from the inside of the chamber. Everything was quiet for what seemed like an eternity. "Father?" Reavus called. "Father!" He ran through the tunnel and back into the dark chamber. There was a large crater in the center of the room, filled with toxic waste. Next to the crater lay his father's bandanna he had always worn around his mouth, rarely removing it. Reavus heard someone calling from the surface. He came back into the light and saw his father's close friend, Conor looking down at him from the top of the hole. "Reavus! Where's Alex?" he asked. Reavus looked up at him, holding the black bandanna and began to tear up
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